"When a FRIEND betrays"
True relations on earth are hard to find,
and so a friend is always soo kind.
Takes a lot effort to maintain the relation,
once maintained, we become proud of this invention.
Understands everything without communication.
and we are ready to do anything for this beautiful creation.
But , Heart Breaks into pieces....
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
Every Memory leaves a memorable mark,
and takes me totally in the dark.
All relations seems to be finished,
and every feeling of my Heart gets vanished.
I CRY from my inner soul,
because a special one has played his RoLe.
and Heart Breaks into pieces....
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
I undergoes the state of self-denial,
and thank him for a wonderful TriaL.
Now my life is a beautiful song in MUTE,
and the Friend is now ready with my SubStiTute.
and Heart Breaks into pieces....
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
True relations on earth are hard to find,
and so a friend is always soo kind.
Takes a lot effort to maintain the relation,
once maintained, we become proud of this invention.
Understands everything without communication.
and we are ready to do anything for this beautiful creation.
But , Heart Breaks into pieces....
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
Every Memory leaves a memorable mark,
and takes me totally in the dark.
All relations seems to be finished,
and every feeling of my Heart gets vanished.
I CRY from my inner soul,
because a special one has played his RoLe.
and Heart Breaks into pieces....
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
I undergoes the state of self-denial,
and thank him for a wonderful TriaL.
Now my life is a beautiful song in MUTE,
and the Friend is now ready with my SubStiTute.
and Heart Breaks into pieces....
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
When a person called "FRIEND" Betrays...!!!
TALPI..U r a fantabulous poet...keep it up
ReplyDeleteIts Fab...!!
ReplyDeletei can't describe in words how i feel after reading this...i was abacked i shuld Say...!!
whn n frm whr did u get this Talent as v both r together frm childhood..n i was amazed after seeing such a gr8 poet in U...!!
All d bes my sweet lillte Angel...n i want u 2 fill this Blog with such beautiful Poems...!!
Keep writting...!!
Thank U Mitali n Dee 4 appreciating my workk...!!
ReplyDeleteWaH BeHn ItNi AaChI PoEt BaN GaI YaAr Tu ToH...!!!
ReplyDeleteGuD GoInG YaAr...!!!
SuPeRb PoEm Gr888888888888888888......!!!
awsme yr..i mean i ws not knowng that u r havng this taletent 2...
ReplyDeletegood going sis..keep it up
woh !!!
ReplyDeleteits fantabulus.........
frm where do u gt such serious instance.....
bt one thng for sure this poem directly comes frm ur heart " the pain of losing a FRIEND"
keep it up..... keep writting.......
all the very best DEAR............!!!!!
dats very realistic..
ReplyDeletebut lyf goes on yaar n d more sooner u get d betrayal d sooner u recover..
Unbelivable...!!! you are such a good thinker plotting your thoughts beautifully on paper. good yaar
ReplyDeleteamazing yr.....shandaar h........tum toh matlab poet ban gayi........
ReplyDeleteThats very true....
ReplyDeletegreat work....
excellently written. you have exactly portrayed ur emotions which makes it realistic.keep it up dear.this is modus operandi for u.i didn't know my friend is having so much talent in her.
ReplyDeletefeather is me i.e. ruchi tripathi
ReplyDeleteexcellent poem i really liked it now dont comment me that i have not read ur poem , keep it up sweettttuuuuuuuuu
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